Searching
by joetwo
“Kevin! Any signs?” said Goldstein
“No!”shouted Kevin. They had drove around the island, past woods of ceder trees and lilies to look.
The rifle was gone.
The woman and children wouldn’t be back.
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Written for Trifecta’s Trifextra week fifty-six
Joe2stories 
ahhhhh – suspenseful.
thank you!
You chose really good words and made it work really well!
Great short story, especially with the limit of available words. Funny, this guy Goldstein is showing up in a lot of entries! 🙂
He seems to have an air of authority! Thanks for reading!
Thanks a lot Deana! 🙂
Ah,in cohorts with each other-these two- are they now?Intriguing angle Joe-enjoyed your take on the prompt-would have loved to know what really happened(maybe you will tell us in some other story?):-)
Thanks for reading! 🙂
🙂
Joe! You did it! This is really great. I like this little piece a lot. 🙂
You bent my arm Scriptor!
Heh heh… 🙂
you threw me without your poetry – (so I read it in poetic metric! ha!)
It was an off day!
not off at all – just a different presentation 🙂
Bum-bum-bummm…! (:
🙂
Excellent story!
[can you take the “had” out, pls?]
Thanks! But Ah! word count! word count!
great story
Thank you!